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Slightly reword readme, link email

Schuyler Cebulskie 6 years ago
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@@ -19,11 +19,11 @@ Laravel is a web application framework with expressive, elegant syntax. We belie
 - [Robust background job processing](https://laravel.com/docs/queues).
 - [Robust background job processing](https://laravel.com/docs/queues).
 - [Real-time event broadcasting](https://laravel.com/docs/broadcasting).
 - [Real-time event broadcasting](https://laravel.com/docs/broadcasting).
 
 
-Laravel is accessible, yet powerful, providing tools needed for large, robust applications. A superb combination of simplicity, elegance, and innovation give you tools you need to build any application with which you are tasked.
+Laravel is accessible, yet powerful, providing tools needed for large, robust applications. A superb combination of simplicity, elegance, and innovation gives you a complete toolset required to build any application with which you are tasked.
 
 
 ## Learning Laravel
 ## Learning Laravel
 
 
-Laravel has the most extensive and thorough documentation and video tutorial library of any modern web application framework. The [Laravel documentation](https://laravel.com/docs) is thorough, complete, and makes it a breeze to get started learning the framework.
+Laravel has the most extensive and thorough documentation and video tutorial library of any modern web application framework. The [Laravel documentation](https://laravel.com/docs) is in-depth and complete, making it a breeze to get started learning the framework.
 
 
 If you're not in the mood to read, [Laracasts](https://laracasts.com) contains over 900 video tutorials on a range of topics including Laravel, modern PHP, unit testing, JavaScript, and more. Boost the skill level of yourself and your entire team by digging into our comprehensive video library.
 If you're not in the mood to read, [Laracasts](https://laracasts.com) contains over 900 video tutorials on a range of topics including Laravel, modern PHP, unit testing, JavaScript, and more. Boost the skill level of yourself and your entire team by digging into our comprehensive video library.
 
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ Thank you for considering contributing to the Laravel framework! The contributio
 
 
 ## Security Vulnerabilities
 ## Security Vulnerabilities
 
 
-If you discover a security vulnerability within Laravel, please send an e-mail to Taylor Otwell at taylor@laravel.com. All security vulnerabilities will be promptly addressed.
+If you discover a security vulnerability within Laravel, please send an e-mail to Taylor Otwell via [taylor@laravel.com](mailto:taylor@laravel.com). All security vulnerabilities will be promptly addressed.
 
 
 ## License
 ## License